look......
all around you
there it is
its always there
let it in
see it
feel it
its calling to you
feel it
touch it
taste it
smell it
hear it
the colors
they are all around you
hidden in everything you do
risen above the earths surface
breathe
look around
see it
all around you
there it is
its always there
let it in
see it
feel it
its calling to you
feel it
touch it
taste it
smell it
hear it
the colors
they are all around you
hidden in everything you do
risen above the earths surface
breathe
look around
see it
its there
(photo credited to: http://bobwama.files.wordpress.com/)
I like this poem, I really like how you changed the color for each line. It adds a little something extra to the poem, its a great touch. You definitely bring out all of the senses and I enjoyed that. It's pretty hard to critique poetry because it's all the author's vision and your carefully crafted words, so great poem keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteWow this is GOOOOOOODDD!!! and that's saying something I'm not a poem guy.
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